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TG Caption This: Turned Into An Olympic Swimmer!

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Makoto and Izumi were twins who were very good swimmers. They got this talent from their parents, who were gold-winning Olympic swimmers. Unfortunately, due to their parents having a divorce, the son and daughter were separated . However, after the siblings reached their teenage years, the father and mother forgave each other as the parents decided to remarry. Thus, Makoto started to live back in Izumi’s home and attend her high school. The good thing about it is that he will finally have some time with his estranged sister. To Makoto, the bad thing about transferring to Izumi’s school felt like he is entering uncharted territory.

It was Saturday morning, and Makoto was getting ready to go to his new school’s swimming pool. Recently, Izumi’s Olympic swimming team coach, Ryoga-sensei, asked her to invite her twin brother over to swimming practice.As Makoto finished packing his swimming items in a backpack at home, Izumi came through the front door. “Hi, Makoto,” said the sister as she puts her backpack aside right next to her brother’s backpack. “I just got back from swimming in the neighborhood lake,” said Izumi, “Do you need a ride?” “No, sis. I can handle it on my own,” said the brother, “But thanks for the offer though.” He grabbed his backpack (which is actually Izumi’s backpack), headed out the door. As Makoto started his car, Izumi came out of the house as she yelled, “Don’t leave yet, bro!” “Izumi, I told you I can handle it,” he said. “But you took my backpack by mistake. Don’t wear my swim-” But it was too late as Izumi’s brother drove off.

Makoto arrived at the school swimming pool, carrying his twin sister’s backpack. He opened the door of the fence that surrounds the pool. As he walks in, the teen saw some other boys and girls, who were wearing school swimsuit. They were all sitting on the metal bleachers waiting for Ryoga-sensei to appear and start the practice. Makoto assumed that the coach would appear any moment now. So the boy rushed into the pool’s male locker room. Once he came into the building, he unzipped his backpack. He noticed something odd inside of it.

He pulled the strange item out of his backpack, revealing it to be a one piece female swimming uniform with the color of dark blue and gray and two red straps on the back. It was then Makoto realized that he brought his twin sister’s backpack, along with her swimwear, with him by mistake. He wouldn’t want to wear a girl’s swimsuit. Yet he didn’t have a choice as Makoto was running out of time. So the young man went for it. He quickly stripped out of his casual clothes and put the female swimsuit on his body. It fit him well, but it still feels tight on him. Makoto turned towards a large mirror and look at his reflection. “Oh, the indignity,” Makoto said to himself as he was embarrassed to wear. “I wouldn’t look ridiculous in my sister’s swimsuit if I only were a girl.”

Then, he felt something odd with himself. It’s not the fact that he’s wearing a girl’s swimsuit, but rather something strange that is happening to himself physically. In fact, his body was getting thinner and softer as it loses a few inches in height. His body lost some muscular features. Makoto tried to take the swimsuit off, but it was no use as if it was magically glued to her body. Makoto’s hips got wider and his rear end grew bigger. His “member” sank into his body between the legs. Then, his chest grew into a pair of C-cups. The changes shifted to his face as the latter becomes smoother. Then, his yellow eyes grew wider with longer eyelashes. Finally, his light brown hair grew a few inches and stopped right at his neck.

Makoto look at his new reflection in the mirror and saw nothing but an exact copy of his twin sister, Izumi, wearing the female swimsuit. He (now she), felt the mixed feeling of curiosity, shyness and awkwardness. She couldn’t believe that she was a girl now. Suddenly, she heard a man’s voice yelling from outside. “Where is Makoto!?” It must be Mr. Ryoga calling out for Makoto. So the girl shoved her clothes and bag into a locker, and rushed outside with a goggle in her hands. Then, she stopped a few feet away from stepping outside. She felt unsure what to do next if someone were to see her walking out of the boy’s locker room. Or the fact that the swim coach wouldn’t accept Makoto. Either way, she took a deep breath and walked outside.

Ryoga-sensei looked impatient and said “Is that new kid gonna show up or wh-” “Sorry I’m late, Ryoga-sensei,” the boy-turned girl interrupted as she walked up to the teacher. “I’m Makoto, Izumi’s twin br- sister.” “Oh. Izumi told me a lot about. I thought she said that you’re a boy,” said the swim coach. “But I guess I might have misunderstood what your sister said. Anyway, l’ve been told that you’re a good swimmer like her. So how about a nice swimming race with the other girls?” “Uu-okay, Ryoga-sensei,” said Makoto.

So Makoto and three other girls lined up at the edge of the pool. As Makoto put her swim goggles on her head and over her eyes, Ryoga-sensei shouted. “Alright girls! On your marks! Get set! GO!” And the girls dove into the pool and swam quickly through the water. Makoto struggle to keep up as she still have that uncomfortable thought on her mind since the transformation. She felt anxious on the fact that she was now a girl. Makoto is having these insecurities as she is falling behind.

Then, Makoto heard a girl’s voice calling out to her. “Makoto! You can’t fall back!” Makoto lifted her head out of the water, and spotted Izumi on the other side of the pool. “You can do this, Makoto,” shouted Izumi, “Just keep on swimming!” Makoto took her twin’s word for it. In fact, when she was young, Makoto wanted to be an Olympic swimmer. Before their parents got divorced, Izumi encouraged Makoto during their swimming practices. Now, Makoto gained some confidence got her head back into the race swam like she never swam before. In the process, she caught up to the other female swimmers.

When the race was over, Ryoga-sensei came over to Makoto and said to her, “Good job, Makoto. Though you may need to avoid slowing then, especially after the race starts.” After the swimming coach finish talking to her, Makoto was suddenly hugged by her twin sister. “Makoto, I knew you could do it!” Makoto felt something odd with Izumi and said to her, “Wait, you’re still not mad at me for taking your stuff, are you?” “Of course not, brother, or sister now that you’re a girl,” said Izumi, “I figured you wouldn't have anything else to wear other than that swimsuit of mine while you’re swimming.” “Also, how did you know I became a girl?” Makoto asked. “Because that swimsuit is magical. It enhances the wearer’s swimming abilities. They just needed some confidence and motivation within themselves,” Izumi explained, “However, since the swimsuit is only to be worn by females, it turned any male who wears it into girls. I got it from a special place..” “So, am I gonna remain a girl forever?” asked Makoto. “Afraid so,” her twin sister confirmed. “At least I can spend some quality time with you,” continued Izumi as she tries to cheer Makoto up. “We may want to work on your swimming skills for the Olympics.”
Inspired by a Turn-Into-A-Girl's previous caption, which is not on the webpage due to the hack of March 2015.

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kajapiasu's avatar

Yet he didn't have a choice...yet he didn't have a choice...yet he didn't have a choice....


Excellent job!! You are one unstoppable writer!